Blog 6

1) On the day of the test i should read the passage carefully, twice and on the second time i will underline any details and most importantly a specific idea that i would need for my essay. The 1st paragraph must be an introduction with a good theses. I could write a summary as well but i cant leave any information out of it because it has to be based on the reading passage.

2) The things i should look out for based on my previous test should be spelling correctly, since i usually wake up early tired and out of it i need to be careful not to mess it up. I need to make sure the essay so far makes sense so the reader wont think i wrote it without even thinking. My usual problem with development is repetition so i need to stop explaining the same details and such over and over again. Although, i usually am a little anxious before a test.

3) First of all so i could make sure that i wont feel exhausted the next day i will get a good night sleep in which i will go to sleep early and have a healthy morning breakfast. Second, I need to practice free writing an essay so i can make sure that i write my test essay well and ill be in the right state of mind. Third, i should write it in a way such that it wont have any repetition and it will be well written. Finally, i need to have more self confidence in myself so i could do well on the essay, so i will practice and show up on time.

Blog 5

On the police side i believe that they think it was right to give Angie to Doyle because Eileen, her mother wasn't responsible for taking care of her really and she never treated her right. Even though Remy and Lionel put her in danger and lied about her, it was for the best. They believed that they should have brought her to the police captain because he actually took care of her and accepted responsibility for her.

On Patrick's side he believes in justice and what is right for the people and the law. He wanted to find Angie and give her back to her mom safe and sound. He did whatever he had to do to get Angie back and the police captain arrested for stealing Eileen's child.

The side I believe the movie takes is Patrick's side because he was doing everything he could in the investigation to get Angie back to her mom safe. Throughout the movie we were following and watching him since he's the main character and that he was finding suspects leading to where they found her and what they went through.